For many people, the reason they work hard is to earn more money.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Many people think that making more money is the primary incentive of those who work hard. While this can be true for some, I personally feel there are other, equally important reasons for working hard.
It is true that, generally speaking, people who work longer hours yearn a bigger paycheck. In most office jobs today, working overtime is generously compensated by the employers, especially when there are urgent deadlines to meet. Likewise, anyone who is willing to exert extra effort in fields such as agriculture can also increase their output, thus making more profit. This seems to explain why some people choose to work harder than others.
However, I believe the role of passion is no less important. For vast majority of people, working hard is simply one of the ways to enjoy themselves, not necessarily to earn higher wages. Other people, on the other hand, are driven by a sense of higher purpose in life. Multi-billionaires such as Elon Mask continue to work around 50 hours a week, despite having a net worth of 140 billion dollars. In his case, the goal is to help mankind colonize Mars, which is said to be the life mission of Space X. Hence, most people are not motivated to work hard by money.
To conclude, financial reward is only one of the many reasons for working hard, and it is certainly not the main one. I am convinced that love for one’s job and/or a sense of mission are what motivate most of us to work harder.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 152, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'others'?
Suggestion: others
...e for some, I personally feel there are other, equally important reasons for working ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, likewise, so, thus, while, such as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1198.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69803921569 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48283302361 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627450980392 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 378.9 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.3532711055 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 85.5714285714 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2142857143 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298210333486 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100861045138 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0904285248124 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191526199043 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0803085926162 0.056905535591 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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