Many people say the gap between rich and poor people is wider, as rich people become richer and poor people grow poorer. What problems could this situation cause and what measures can be done to address those problems?
Despite the world’s economic advance, many people still suffer from the growing disparity between the wealthy and the poor. Personally I believe that the primary implication of this phenomenon is increasing social tensions and conflicts and some changes in tax regulation can effectively tackle this problem.
The most adverse result of economic inequality is social instability. The poor, in fact, often perceive the rich as an evil entity which chronically exploits them for profit and a big hindrance to a happy life, leading to unreasonable aggression and hostility. An example is the character depiction in many stories in Vietnam literature. While the rich people are often viewed as greedy and callous villains, the protagonists of the story are impoverished. There is always an underlying fight of the poor against the rich, which represents social conflicts happening in real life. With doubt, a wide gap between rich and poor people imposes a threat to the safety and stability of society.
In my opinion, introducing laws regarding wealth distribution or taxation is an effective measure to combat economic inequality. People having higher income have to pay a much higher tax, which is subsequently employed to provide welfare for the poor such as free accommodation, free access to education. In Vietnam, for example, the authorities have carried out this initiative for years receiving many positive results. There is no demonstration happening and the living standard of the poor are improved by the support of richer people, resulting in a stable and happy society, The success in Vietnam is a salient example on how a few changes in regulation regarding taxation can narrow the gap between the wealthy and the poor.
In conclusion, I hold a firm believe that a progressive tax and welfare system can soon eradicate economic inequality and its consequences, such as: social tension and conflicts.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... such as: social tension and conflicts.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, regarding, so, still, while, for example, in conclusion, in fact, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1621.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31475409836 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95205074502 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567213114754 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 516.6 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.1695828324 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.692307692 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4615384615 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46153846154 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265593816426 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0882651763739 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0743541476375 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145619500473 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0805661490171 0.056905535591 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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