Many people say that the internet is the most important invention ever. Do you agree or disagree with this and if not, what do you believe to be more important. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
For decades, the Internet has built its way into our daily lives and proven to be an indispensable invention. For this reason, some people think the Internet is the most influential human-made invention in history. Personally, I am of the opinion that the creation of the internet, without doubt, is important to mankind's development but definitely shouldn’t be considered as the most crucial invention of all time.
To begin with, there is no denying that the invention of the internet had a remarkable influence on the evolution of humans and the world as a whole. Regardless of the fact that the internet was only invented in 1983, less than 50 years from now, it has transformed our society drastically. Apparently, a myriad of jobs, devices and definitions were born owing to the Internet. A case in point is the transformation of the mail delivery process.The modification of the mail delivery process is one example. It is evident that, following the invention of the Internet and the presence of e-mail, most letters were no longer delivered by post office or telegram, but rather over the internet. Moreover, ample jobs like programmer, web developer, software engineer were also created thanks to the internet. Furthermore, the Internet has paved the way for the development of social media, which has proven to be extremely significant these days. For all intents and purposes, the Internet has reshaped the culture.
However, I believe that it would be superficial to consider the Internet as the most vital man made creation. According to HomoSapiens, four major revolutions in human evolution have occurred: the Cognitive, Agricultural, Industrial, and Technical Revolutions. The Internet era belongs to the last one, which is where we are now. In other words, prior to the invention of the internet, along with history, a plethora of other crucial innovations such as fire, paper, gunpowder, and electricity, to mention a few, were born. The internet would not have existed, to a greater or smaller extent, if it had not been for the aforementioned preceding inventions.
Although in certain ways, the internet poses great influence on communication and educational systems, I am convinced that it is merely one of the most important innovations, not the most important.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, such as, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1929.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 370.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21351351351 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07280182081 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564864864865 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 610.2 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 10.0 2.52805611222 396% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.2668755457 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.470588235 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7647058824 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.94117647059 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190564980095 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0620777749496 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0495752481748 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127198425985 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0460449509103 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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