many people say that only way to created a good job is to complete a course of university education other claims that it is better to start work after school and gain experience in the world of work do you agree or disagree with the statement .
Gones of the days when masses indulge in work without going to university .However, it has undergone a sea .specially it globalization took place .Still ,there is a section of society ,which prefer to work without higher education. I extremely agree with the former statement the reason elucidated in upcoming segment.
First and the foremost reason 'why individual should get higher knowledge before involving in
work.Individual can never accumulate better job without getting professional education. To be more precise reputed vistas,appoint only well qualified individuals for their companies.A mechanic worker for instance to not know the advance knowledge as the engineer and engineer can do work with new technology and advance men going to his professional knowledge and higher education which is not only less time consuming but also more advance.thus the worker never performed as like engineer which get high salary or more promosion chances which make them to leave luxurious life hence higher qualifications make the career path more achievable .
However,after believe that indulge in work in early age which make them able to handle financial and economical situation when they are young hence they earn money they learn money management skills at the early age as they know need to invest her money to university education .Nevertheless ,if one spend hefty amount of education. it is beneficial for them as they get higher job in future ,which they can get more chance of promotion as well as they can spend luxurious life style ,where as navie always try to fulfill their basic needs.As they could not able to complete their luxurious lifestyle dream .therefore this is not a wastage of money .
To recapitulate ,i vehemently vouch that being a higher qualified person ,get more chance to spend life more comfortable and more chance for promosion yet navie could not ever complete their dream and never get high salary in the life .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, nevertheless, so, still, therefore, thus, well, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1636.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2101910828 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8123023968 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535031847134 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 528.3 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 44.0 20.2975951904 217% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 137.917159401 49.4020404114 279% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 233.714285714 106.682146367 219% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 44.8571428571 20.7667163134 216% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 15.7142857143 7.06120827912 223% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 41.0 5.01903807615 817% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.10594156297 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0601575007081 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0306951823535 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0575113710117 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0498321529827 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.5 13.0946893788 195% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 18.36 50.2224549098 37% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 21.6 11.3001002004 191% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.83 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.78957915832 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 19.6 10.1190380762 194% => OK
text_standard: 26.0 10.7795591182 241% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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