some people said that the government should invest more money to research medical research rather than environment protection. you are agree or disagree.
spending money on medical discoveries for the humans safety should be more rather than environment protection thought by some people of society .I totally disagree with the statement .i will discuss the causes of my opinion in the subsequent paragraph .
By the medical research it could be easy to protect human body from the disease which is very essential for human safety for instance in this era cancer has a huge disease which is a dangerous and human killing.millions of people suffer with this disease on every year. It is a necessary to overcome this problem .while it is only possible by the medical research secondly the whole world is based on human bodies and human work human play a crucial role to run this whole nature .finally human protection is a first need of protect the earth and life on earth .
On the other side, it is more considerable to protect the animals and environment nature lap of human is very essential the lackness of environment protection today human faced coved 19 pandemic conditions firstly government should protect the environment animal and try to reduce the environment in balance condition and pollution .Through this it is possible to save the earth and save the life on earth for human as well as the species so balance should be very necessary on the earth .
To conclude although medical researchers should be necessary for human protection ,yet environment and species protection are more important to make the balance between human and the whole earth life .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1261.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96456692913 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70737197093 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 176.041082164 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.468503937008 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 406.8 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 50.0 20.2975951904 246% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 98.35161412 49.4020404114 199% => OK
Chars per sentence: 252.2 106.682146367 236% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 50.8 20.7667163134 245% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 17.6 7.06120827912 249% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2541631665 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.167733504669 0.084324248473 199% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0819008399316 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192714261576 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0737465836519 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 27.3 13.0946893788 208% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 20.73 50.2224549098 41% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.8 11.3001002004 202% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.38 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 22.0 10.1190380762 217% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 23.0 10.7795591182 213% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.