It is generally argued that there are a number of trash and wastes have been throw to our ecosystem without reducing its damage completely. This idea is fairly flawed owing to the development of modern technology as well as the awareness of inhabitants.
On the one hand, Advocates to this may claim that there are more and more places that have been filled up with full of plastic belongings and waste. To some extent, this predicament is obvious when it comes from places with lack of signs and weak environmental purnishments. For instance, in third world nation like Vietnam, the penalties for throwing trash is not as strict as in developed nations. Moreover, it is also true that there is not enough waste bins for people to put trash in and owing to the unawareness of environment issues, there are more and more people do this unconsciuosly.
On the other hand, i am of the opinion that we haven't created this bad culture and there are numerous solutions to tackle with these problems. Thanks to high tech tools, it has emerge as a a key role in handling with environmental comtamination and pollution. To be more precise, nowsaday scientists use these tools as a efficient way of reducing the polutants in many aspects, such as with sea water or earth. Furthermore, the raising of awareness from environmental campagins, purnishments and education also make significant impacts in people's perception about the "throw-away" culture.
Putting everything into consideration, eventhough we haven't find a remedy to solve this issue completely, it seems to me that in the modern society, it would definitely make progress.
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- Life in the 21st century is better than the previous century To what extent do you agree or disagree Give reasons and support with relevant examples 68
- In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving the existing public transport. Discuss bo 56
- Many people say that we have developed into a “throw-away”culture, because we are filling up our environment with so manyplastic bags and rubbish that we cannot fully dispose of. To whatextent do you agree with this opinion and what measures can youre 73
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, third, well, for instance, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1374.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07011070111 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1121824595 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594095940959 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.5260958077 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 124.909090909 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6363636364 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.72727272727 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247267911378 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0785766134951 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0368766026435 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124194186641 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0489275215342 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.