For the time being, it is undeniable that the academic standard can not be develped without the role of teachers. In this essay, I totally agree that teachers make a vital contribution to national edication.This essay will show that not only are teachers effective educators but they also role models.
Firstly, teachers are considerably the second greastest tutors after parents. Through well-structured lessons with academic demonstrations, tutors will not only teach students subjects at school but also important soft skills to be used in the daily life. For example, teachers always educate their pupils to think carefully before doing homework. By reviewing the lesson and read more documents, students have opportunities to approach new knowlegde then put the knowlegde into practice to imporove their memories.
Secondly, the process of learning is a long and tense one so that children can easily get bored or drained. As a result of it, teachers will inspire and motivate pupils to reach their full potential. Like the seconds parents, teachers will lend kids a sympathic ear then together work out for suitable solutions in difficult situations. For instance, children often have troubles in family or friend problems so that emotional support is essential. Moreover, instructors are also a role model that students want to set an example. When students look at their teachers,they feel like to follow teachers' behaviors and personality in order to become good citizens in the society like them.
In conclusion, there is no denying that the education industry can be enhanced thanks to the efforts of teachers,who are thought to be great tutors and significant motivators for teenagers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1433.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34701492537 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90827272344 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.64552238806 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.6087373064 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.230769231 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6153846154 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3076923077 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142747805852 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0477071526155 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0532243598368 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0874588299249 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0583178503227 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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