In this day and age, that travelling has been boosting our soul is widely recognized. Thus, it is undeniable the advantages of travelling not only help us to improve our knowledge but also broaden social relationships.
Primarily, our horizons can be enhanced thanks to moving. Particularly, by paying a visit to new places, we have chances to access various civilizations, history and contributions, leading to providing a hands-on educational experience in real life. Simultaneously, our soft skills will be increased to solve the issues in daily life and on the next trip more effectively. For example, we can not avoid such problems as our car is broken in the middle of the way, etc. At that time, we ought to phone to rescue team to assist us.
In the second place, taking a trip to novel areas offers us opportunities to meet and communicate with people from various backgrounds; hence, we can connect with people with common interests to create lasting relationships. Consequently, our life will be enriched more with interesting friends. Besides, travellers' mind also can be relaxed and have a peaceful time when we move with our friends. Going far away allows us to disconnect from daily troubles. Seeing beautiful places, making new friends and creating unforgettable memories help us leave everything bad behind and go towards a bright future.
In brief, it is an irrefutable fact that travelling is a great choice for each individual for entertaining and getting rid of stress after work-hard days. It is beneficial that people in our society clear their work to spend time flying with families and peers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, hence, if, second, so, thus, for example, in brief, in the second place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1355.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07490636704 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01510921635 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.640449438202 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 413.1 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.0564023573 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.7857142857 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0714285714 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0704217780415 0.244688304435 29% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.024834873777 0.084324248473 29% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0319524896408 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0505676592527 0.151304729494 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0356484137301 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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