In the present age, due to the high academic standard, school-age children have to spend more time at school to study than stay at home. That means their classmates tend to affect a greater impact on them than parents. From my perspective, I totally agree with this statement because of two reasons, which will be shown in this essay, are compassionation and motivation.
First and foremost, it is said that peers are considerably understandable partners beside parents. Being at the same age,classmates likely comprehend thoroughly. For instance, teenagers have their own sensitive secrets that can not talk with father or mother. Moreover, their partners also have abilities to teach them soft skills which help children to deal with some certain situations.
Second, classmates are also believable motivators and inspiring-takers. When kids get results at important exams, some marks are better,some marks are worse. To enhance the scores, students had better ask their peers how to study well,leading to build a positive learning environment. Setting a good example to follow is a method to improve themselves. Besides, despite being at the same generation,thier fellows are also seconds teachers with more studying experience to share with them.
All in all, it is undeniable that classmates play a vital role in kids' success at school. Personally, without their fellows, children do not have enough abilities to achieve their own targets.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, moreover, second, so, well, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1221.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 227.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37885462555 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04431742413 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.665198237885 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 368.1 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.547361813 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 87.2142857143 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2142857143 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.42857142857 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243255002758 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0680327909353 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.05870704546 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140267866438 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0784430618213 0.056905535591 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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