Many people think that countries have a moral obligation to help
each other, while others argue that aid money is misspent by the
governments that receive it and therefore international aid should
not be given to poor countries. Discuss these two points of view and
give your opinion.
The earth, we are living in, has become a global village. So, in this global village, countries have to depend on each other. There are poor and rich countries that depend on each others in some way or others. It is a situation, that is causing, people to think that if rich governments or countries should come up to help poor countries especially when the aid money, provided to poor countries, is being misspent. However, it is a difficult question to answer but anyway let's check it further in our essay.
The first and foremost thing that must be considered is corrupt governments of poor countries. If we see around the globe, we shall come up with the fact that there are enough poor-countries governments bearing the allegations of corruption or facing legal charges against them. There are many prominent examples that prompt in our minds if we think about the matter such as ex-Pakistani governments or Venezuela.
Further, another crucial aspect of consideration may be of mismanagement. Different departments working in poor countries either under government or independently are not well-trained to keep up the aid money. These departments would be lacking in figures and facts about field. Resultingly, there were not well ready to use aid efficiently.
However, even being many shortcomings, still, this aid causes to help many poor countries to develop projects. Thus, these poor countries could develop their own resources. Further, it is a proved fact that when poor countries will be able adequate to feed their nations, it will surely bring positive effect on developed countries as well. For example, it may cause a decline in the refugee stream that is being caused to hurt Europe or rich countries.
So, the conclusion or sum up of the whole essay is that rich countries should keep helping poor countries, not just for poor countries but for their own sake as well.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, but, first, however, if, may, so, still, thus, well, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1596.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05063291139 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81703876769 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53164556962 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.8571574864 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.8823529412 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5882352941 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.76470588235 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267969486832 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0889506335422 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0659022723219 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148524462016 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0587372643548 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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