What are the main tasks of universities: to offer students knowledge and skills essential for their future career, or to provide students with access to knowledge itself? What do you think university education should contain?
More and more students are taking admissions in the universities nowadays. They get admission to learn new skills and knowledge that may help them through their future career. So, the first and foremost priority for students remain to acquire skills, helpful in their future career. When I applied for the university's admission same concept of university education was existing in my mind as well and still today I stand with the same stance that university should offer students skills fruitful for their future career.
A student who gets admission in any professional institute or rather in any institute, heavily invests not only in the terms of money but time as well. He/She does so to get some reward back. Though student would prefer that the university they have been admitted, provide them with suitable knowledge and skills that are essential to provide a gurrantte for a successful future ahead.
Further, especially in third worlds countries a general family always lacking of financial resources. Thus the importance of skilled focused education arose more crucially.
However, all these factors must be taken into consideration but besides, we cannot totally ignore the original essence of university to provide pure knowledge. But as the demand of epoch it is required to design a university course that well blend skills as well as knowledge.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 103, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
... always lacking of financial resources. Thus the importance of skilled focused educa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, however, may, so, still, third, thus, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1150.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 219.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25114155251 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6677141872 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.630136986301 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 364.5 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.2585209016 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.545454545 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9090909091 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.81818181818 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.329250558843 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108827178921 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0968558234974 0.0667982634062 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160416972264 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.118180533452 0.056905535591 208% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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