many people think it is very important to protect the environment but they make no effort to do it themselves. why is the case ? what actions can be done to encourage individuals to protect the environment ?
Environment deterioration has emerged as a topic of deeply-concerned for a long time. The vast majorities are aware of protecting it; however, they haven’t been taking any action to do it. The reason why they haven’t done anything yet and some approaches that can be taken to encourage them will be represented.
One of the factor prevent them from taking action is the lack of knowledge about the problem. It is true that the media always bring up news about the effect of environment deterioration but not the solution to cope with it. Indeed, no matter how much effort has been putted in taking care of the environment, citizens cannot succeed in doing it .Take plastic bag as an example. Although many people are aware that plastic bags are detrimental to the environment, especially the soil and water environment, the citizens keep using it as the main material for transporting stuff in their life. This is because they lack knowledge about the replaced material which would be safer and eco-friendlier.
To mitigate with this distressing problem, some approachable solutions are suggested. Firstly, government should invest budget on some scientific research relevant to this topic such as the replacement of plastic bags or ways to recycle the rubbish, etc. Also, classes which provide the citizens with some feasible methods that the majority can take action in order to protect the environment are suggested to be organized. It is noteworthy that these classes should be free to be accessed so that people are stimulated to participate.
In closing, the distance between awareness and action is still a rising problem in many countries due to the lack of knowledge. Therefore, the government should consider the aforementioned approaches so that this problem can be solved as fast as possible.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, so, still, therefore, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1521.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15593220339 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97652213142 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.559322033898 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.2906300798 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.642857143 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0714285714 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.78571428571 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230828798719 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0723812766553 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0561260308736 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139321272257 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0661636222411 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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