Leadership skills is an essential element which market searching largely. People says that leaders are born naturally, in against that, some people expresses that leadership activity can be learnt.I partially agree with the said statement.
Firstly, the great leaders are born with the god gifted skillset. Leaders implements with the skills in such a way that they mould the failure into success. Their mindset is created in such a way that leaders look failure as first attempt in learning. Steve jobs had a mindset, skills of getting work done through other people's. leader has influence over the people and they distribute the task with the person's capability. For instance, a fish cannot be given a task to climb a tree.Secondly, The one who leads has the courage to take responsiblity 100%. the responsibilty of failure , achievement, etc. should be taken by the leaders. they are the man of the words, such type of skillset is difficult to learn.
However, leadership is a skill which can be learn and not gifted. By proper training, a person can become a man of words, great believer, and influencer. Training provides a situation in which they are tested upon and forces them to act as a leader to come up from the situation. For instance, Badabusiness.com is a leadership training institution which train thousands of people annually. they had created such type of surroundings in which leader can be moulded. Furthermore, practice makes man perfect, leadership is a quality which can be improved by practising on a daily basis. For instance, implementing daily task completion can help some person achieve success in a given period of time. Organising a day, may reach you to full utilisation of time and resources and, these quality possess leadership.
To deduce, some person are naturally born with the good leadership skills and some needs training to enhance their leadership quality.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1591.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09935897436 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87809954865 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541666666667 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.506308892 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.55 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246917571105 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0721681674201 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0639072241559 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176839648235 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0480930543291 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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