Many people today are choosing to travel abroad to other country
Why is this happening? Is this positive or negative?
It is said that traveling abroad is gaining more attention from people in these days and ages. This writing will discuss the roots and also demonstrate the significant benefits gained from this trend.
On the one hand, traveling is becoming more attractive and appealing to tourists due to various reasons. To begin with, people have a tendency to be curious about the traditions in various nations, and traveling could assist them to explore diverse cultural aspects all over the world. The tourists not only enjoy their life and make unforgettable memories but also study about the ways local people live which satisfy curiousness of travelers. In addition, the development of technology in transportation assists exploring and visiting nations to become easier than in the past. Indeed, there are plenty of airline companies waiting for the customer to commute to other nations and enjoy their journey with the ticket prices seem to be capable financial.
On the other hand, it is traveling that plays an essential role in developing living standards and making a valuable contribution to residents in the host country. First of all, the governments have a tendency to improve the standard of living in attractive tourism places in order to appeal to more travelers. It means that not only tourists but also local people could get benefits like decreasing contamination from developing of public infrastructures which are built by the council. Secondly, the door to career prospects is widely opened to the residents in the host country thanks to the recruitment held by the international firms. The development of traveling might boost the requirement of the workforce and a number of employees could be recruited in customer services by travel firms thanks to the association of cultures on the world.
In conclusion, the roots for traveling abroad come from several roots and the writer personally agree that positive influences made by this trend support diverse aspects to living standards of people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, in addition, in conclusion, first of all, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1695.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24767801858 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83044276122 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541795665635 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 519.3 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.6307658135 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.384615385 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8461538462 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.07692307692 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178991586206 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0596058096251 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0494875980073 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121772827573 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0526083951155 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.