In recent years, the family has changed, as well as family roles. Why is this happening? Is this positive or negative development?
As the society is advancing by leaps and bounds, the attitude people adopt towards family order has undergone a noticeable trend and far-reaching transformation. Under this circumstance, the fact that the family position has altered. Hence, it is imperative to figure out the causes of this phenomenon and find out is this positive or negative trend.
Firstly, it is noteworthy that the causes of this phenomenon are mainly because of the changing of society structure. Many studies have shown that although it is invisible, the feminism movement helps females participating in work effectively. In the past, females were restricted by rules which were set by male lawmakers. Nowadays, this negative trend has been eliminated and females set their foot in every walk of life. Therefore, this movement also encourages females to create the family equality and this leads to the fact that the power in a family is separated equally. Hence, the family order in this society has transferred because of the revolution of gender equality.
In my opinion, this ongoing (ascending) trend is a positive trend. The participation (involvement, engagement, association) of females into the labor workforce has improved the overall productivity of every occupation. In other words, the engagement of gender equalization has exploited fully resources from females which could not be done before. Furthermore, it helps woman have voice in family. For example, the majority victims (sufferers) of family violence (domestic violence) is females. If females do not have the right to raise her voice, the around people such as kids are heavily affected and it spreads violent actions to the later generation, and it is also inhumanity. In the long term, it casts shadow effect on the core value of culture and morality.
In conclusion, this ascending trend comes from the gender equality. From my viewpoint, this trend brings many merits to the society.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1624.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27272727273 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87580974099 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538961038961 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 534.6 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.9002915393 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.2222222222 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1111111111 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.05555555556 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278189851534 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0909507902108 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0932795088645 0.0667982634062 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178885691984 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0896801671981 0.056905535591 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.99 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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