Sport has an important role in society Some people believe that it is nothing more than leisure activities Discuss both views and give your opinion

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Sport has an important role in society. Some people believe that it is nothing more than leisure activities.
Discuss both views and give your opinion?

It is said that physical activities have the power to contribute to society, while there is an opinion that passive doings are more attractive. This writing will discuss the positive influences made by this trend and demonstrate the writer’s point of view.
On the one hand, people embrace various convincing roots to believe that sport plays an essential role in the community, first of all, activities belonged to physic could improve the health of people because of the increase of risk of obesity. People who do exercises regularly have a tendency to decrease the risk of blood disease and expand their longevity. Secondly, there is a belief that physical doings could boost the happiness of people in a day thanks to releasing calories. The more calories released, the more effective people accomplish assignments which develop the economy in their country.
On the other hand, it is a leisure activity that owns tremendous positive influences on people. To begin with, people tend to gain more stress in learning because of a knowledge-based society so, passive activities seem to be the effective way for them to release negative feelings. Indeed, watching television is the one of most popular ways for people to take a rest and make a balance between personal life and work environment. In addition, leisure activities could drive people to boost their focus which is essentially required nowadays. Students might spend hours reading which assists them to develop the focus and acquire theoretical comprehension.
In the writer’s opinion, I am prone to the prior statement that physical activity outweighs leisure doing. Sports and other exercises could support people to not only improve their health but also keep fit.

In conclusion, there are various attractive benefits gained by doing exercises and leisure activities also own its appealing advantages for people to follow.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, while, in addition, in conclusion, first of all, to begin with, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1599.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29470198675 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76650229219 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562913907285 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.6013772621 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.214285714 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5714285714 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.92857142857 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254813915989 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0824332785549 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0467561415299 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135554249184 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0258050430541 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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