Many people today, especially in the developed world, are choosing to have fewer
Nowadays, in most of countries in a backward state , people tend to have just one to two children or even they do not give birth at all. it is considered as an ubiquitous thing , but it is an alarming too.
The explainations for this thing could be husbands and wives do not have time to take care of family . The society , meanwhile , increasingly develop women demands for going out to work . they believe that this is one of the ways that prove the equality rights , they have . Both of husband and wife usually take their time to work and earn money , that why they do not have intention that have more kids . The second reason is they could not put up with the pressure from birth child and look after it . Many people think that they are living in a hectic pace of life so having a kid is a bad thing . Whenever they have leisure time they go travel without hesitation. it is quite straighforward to perceive why they are not willing to have children.take japan as an example , Japanese women delay in giving birth during the long period , so japan severe shortage of labour resourse . The government had to import labour resourse from others contries .
Personally this situation is a bad trend . it will lead to lacking of labour resoure in the future . The young population will be decrease while the old population will be increase . it is not only has bad affects to the aconomy of a country but also influent to the mankind’s existance . The government should enact policies to encourage women give birth .
In conclusion, the couples has their own opinion about have children .By considering the pros and cos they will have the best decision for themselves.
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- Many people today especially in the developed world are choosing to have fewer 61
- Many people today especially in the developed world are choosing to have fewer children or none at all Why is this happening and do you think it is a good trend 61
- Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals Others say that there are more important environmental problems Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 76
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, second, so, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1368.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66894197952 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56268722556 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.559726962457 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.6339895564 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.4705882353 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2352941176 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.11764705882 7.06120827912 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 40.0 5.01903807615 797% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12260729613 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0381057519735 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0445920563563 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0681644165726 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0445042819646 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.0946893788 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.51 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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