Many people today especially in the developed world are choosing to have fewer

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Many people today, especially in the developed world, are choosing to have fewer

Nowadays, in most of countries in a backward state , people tend to have just one to two children or even they do not give birth at all. it is considered as an ubiquitous thing , but it is an alarming too.

The explainations for this thing could be husbands and wives do not have time to take care of family . The society , meanwhile , increasingly develop women demands for going out to work . they believe that this is one of the ways that prove the equality rights , they have . Both of husband and wife usually take their time to work and earn money , that why they do not have intention that have more kids . The second reason is they could not put up with the pressure from birth child and look after it . Many people think that they are living in a hectic pace of life so having a kid is a bad thing . Whenever they have leisure time they go travel without hesitation. it is quite straighforward to perceive why they are not willing to have children.take japan as an example , Japanese women delay in giving birth during the long period , so japan severe shortage of labour resourse . The government had to import labour resourse from others contries .

Personally this situation is a bad trend . it will lead to lacking of labour resoure in the future . The young population will be decrease while the old population will be increase . it is not only has bad affects to the aconomy of a country but also influent to the mankind’s existance . The government should enact policies to encourage women give birth .

In conclusion, the couples has their own opinion about have children .By considering the pros and cos they will have the best decision for themselves.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, second, so, while, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1368.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66894197952 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56268722556 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.559726962457 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.6339895564 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.4705882353 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2352941176 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.11764705882 7.06120827912 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 40.0 5.01903807615 797% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12260729613 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0381057519735 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0445920563563 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0681644165726 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0445042819646 0.056905535591 78% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.0946893788 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.51 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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