Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Nowaday our enviroment is seriously destroyed. it is undoubtedly true that it come up a great deal of envirometal problems. Some people believe that the main enviromental problem is the loss of animals and plants. others argue that there are more important enviromental problems.
it is straighforward to perceive why people consider extinction of particular species is highest concern. For instance, the recent forest fire killed approximately five hundred million species consist of animals and plants in Austraylia . our ecosystem is being rapidly damaged . we have loss many kind of endangered species in Red list. it means we have loss at about biodiversity, natural resourses respectively. these things impact a lot to human and he production of crops.
Besides that we also can realise there are a vast number of other enviromental issues such as dought flood tsunami... and so on. Especially the enviromental contamination problem. if the loss of animals and plants impact indirectly to human these issues surely affect directly to them. for example forest fire produces large amounts of cacbonhydrates and other harmful gases. these gases destroyed ozone layer lead to augment health deseases for human beings such as skin cancer,myopic ......
In conclusion it is clear that ecosystem is infinitely necessary for us . The loss individual species is alarming to human . I disagree that people are just mindful to their own benifits and indifferently to flora and fauna of enviroment . if this circumstance is still continue to exist people would be the only species in the world
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, so, still, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1344.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.376 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03084474981 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.62 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.6192749751 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.2 106.682146367 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.5 20.7667163134 60% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 5.01903807615 498% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216594727095 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.059345753631 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0494427779801 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129710664108 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0520096357136 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.84 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.2 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.04 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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