many peoples think that Now a day we have too many choices. to what extend do you agree or not.
Today is time of innovation and creation of new thing. Each day we encounter new development and discovery. It's not only prospective of few individuals all of us have knowledge that choices are being increasing order. In following essay will discuss the multiple option in each and every field from education to daily commodities of life which make often hard to select.
Firstly, in educational sector career prospective previously only had limited options but these department advances with high speed. For example in 1950 peoples only could do medicines or engineering however, today many more branches and sub branches established with collaboration of multiple fields. further, in employment have not been centered around fewer departments. Many peoples are doing freelancing who don't want to work under time limits. Although with urbanization of world choices did not remain centered around one country or specific culture and people moving different places.Because of many more options.
Secondly, we could not say that these improvement only for one sector for instance now we have different choices even in grossery or doing shopping. Many international brand and locals having so much variety and marketing skills that make somehow people extravagant. Although these different options have more variety as compare to past but these some time cause serious problems. In many causes with increasing variety standard of product most of time neglected besides this many unhealthy ingredients are increased. For example, increased use polythene bag which utilize in packaging cause pollution.
In conclusion, I totally agree that currently men having more variety to select than in the past. Though this development make life better but also leads to unhealthy life style.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Because
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...ture and people moving different places.Because of many more options. Secondly, we cou...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1508.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48363636364 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8014164068 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621818181818 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.5657236553 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.25 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1875 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.3125 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217249175475 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0664998034375 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.058278197332 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113232423608 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0610405089121 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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