Many students decide to further their study abroad.
What are the benefits and drawbacks of studying abroad.
Studying overseas is commonly considered as their purpose in the future. Broadening horizons about the local culture and learning a foreign language are the merits. However, they tend to face the drawbacks, like high cost for living and departure requirement.
Having unusual experience through studying overseas among the international students will give them new lessons about the local wisdom. They will find the circumstance that is different than their own country although such students learn how to interact with the native or local communities who will guide them to experience the culture even the cuisine. Moreover, staying in another country means such people should communicate using their host country language which enhance their ability in order to learn such local language. For example, those who join the Youth Exchange Programme in Kyoto, Japan are obligated to speak Japanese regardless of the fluency because the native will help them to pronounce it well.
On the other hand, before the participants departure to their destination, they should fulfill the paperwork such as VISA because it is used for those who want entering another country. There are a lot of requirement like a copy of birthday certificate, family card, and passport. This process takes around one to three weeks, so students can arrange their itinerary while waiting the VISA. Following this, pupils should manage their own accommodation and living cost, so this can challenge those with limited budget. For instance, a group of students for the University of Indonesia who enrolled the International Students Exchange in the Harvard University last year spent their own money virtually $15,000 for each person as the budget to purchase their needs during a year programme.
In conclusion, the students who want to live abroad for studying purpose will get benefits and also drawbacks. Although they meet the local community who introduce them about novel culture and learning foreign language, they are challenged to arrange the documents and need a tremendous money to fulfill their living allowance.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: Did you mean 'different 'from''? 'Different than' is often considered colloquial style.
Suggestion: from
...find the circumstance that is different than their own country although such student...
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Line 5, column 31, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'participants'' or 'participant's'?
Suggestion: participants'; participant's
... well. On the other hand, before the participants departure to their destination, they sh...
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Line 5, column 197, Rule ID: A_LOT_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun requirement seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lot of requirements'.
Suggestion: a lot of requirements
...ant entering another country. There are a lot of requirement like a copy of birthday certificate, fa...
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'tremendous money'.
Suggestion: tremendous money
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...oney to fulfill their living allowance.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1776.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39817629179 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65400545902 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55623100304 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 545.4 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.0334667238 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.857142857 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.14285714286 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160217399301 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0616845670825 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0723339902886 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104594880266 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0362185339274 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.34 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.