Some parents think that childcare centres provide the best services for children of preschool age. Other working parents think that family members such as grandparents will be better careers for their kids.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
There are two alternatives in order to take care of children who in the preschool period. First, parents can register their children into childcare centers, while the rest of parents prefer that their own family members should be the caregivers of their children. Eventually, family is the ideal significant others to children because be beneficial for children’s psychological aspects.
It cannot be denied that childcare center is a solutions for several parents. The possible reason why nurses and daycare staffs are entrusted because parents are busy with their own responsibility as a worker. David Kranne and his coworkers found that in the United States approximately 86% parents prefer to choose daycare because of busy life during work. So that, they have no enough time and disable to take care their own children. Precisely, this will affects children emotions and future behavior because they are not interact intensively with their own parents, and it predicts no longer intimately relationship of them.
Regarding the aforementioned option, rising a child since they were a baby will strengthen parents or even family members’ feeling with them. Unconsiously, families are the closest one which encourage children to be the best version of themselves. This impacts on children’s confidence, and they also enable to well-comunicate with other people. For example, a long-term research from an educational psychologist encountered about 75% children in the United Kingdom who had been risen by family members were have a good communication skill.
To conclude, children’s caretakers are persons who can bring psychological benefits for children in order to lead them become a great person in the future, and those whom deserve are close family members.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 46, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a solution' or simply 'solutions'?
Suggestion: a solution; solutions
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Line 5, column 459, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'affect'
Suggestion: affect
...heir own children. Precisely, this will affects children emotions and future behavior b...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'interacted'.
Suggestion: interacted
...nd future behavior because they are not interact intensively with their own parents, and...
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'long-term research'.
Suggestion: long-term research
...unicate with other people. For example, a long-term research from an educational psychologist encoun...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'had'.
Suggestion: had
...o had been risen by family members were have a good communication skill. To co...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... whom deserve are close family members.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, regarding, so, then, well, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1528.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.55636363636 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08818275484 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607272727273 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4873306722 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.538461538 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1538461538 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.76923076923 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263460008281 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0966456842257 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0544091704644 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164517013203 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0713953277224 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.