many university student live with their families while others need to live to live away from home because their universities are in different places.what are the advantages and disadvantages both situation
The university time is the beginning of a new life when the child start to grow as adult. Some of undergraduate choose , if they can, to continue their studies in a university wich is in the same city with their residential home and other will continue their journey trough life in other town far away from home. In those two situation can be as well advantages and disadvantage.
First of all, before to make this choose need to think about all aspects af both situation. In my opinion the most important aspect for choosing university is not the distance from home and suppose to be the university. how is that school and how can bring a better value in people life, what is learned there and how can help to build a better future for postgraduates.
if will be similar university one in home town and other far away from home with the similar opportunity then you can try to find what is the best for pupil. I will try not to talk about the financial because it is clear will be cheaper to pick up a school in your own city because of the expences.
In my opinion is in best interest for a better evolve to apply for a place far away from home. first of all if you are taking in consideration a closer school you are going to have the same life with the same friend and with parents support for everything. Obvious , going away the young people are going to learn how to deal with all aspects of life from daily routine at home to meeting new people and making new friends. they are going to learn about new culture, new enviroment and how to sorted out any small problem without tutor's help.
In my point of view to increase the level of independence for adolescents is better for them to go in a completely different area for completing education.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 119, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...w as adult. Some of undergraduate choose , if they can, to continue their studies ...
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Line 2, column 9, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... advantages and disadvantage. First of all, before to make this choose need to ...
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Line 2, column 43, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to need'
Suggestion: to need
...rst of all, before to make this choose need to think about all aspects af both situ...
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Line 2, column 192, Rule ID: SUPPOSE_TO[1]
Message: Probably you should use a past participle here: 'supposed'.
Suggestion: supposed
...rsity is not the distance from home and suppose to be the university. how is that schoo...
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Line 2, column 222, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: How
... home and suppose to be the university. how is that school and how can bring a bett...
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Line 2, column 297, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...g a better value in people life, what is learned there and how can help to build ...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...ld a better future for postgraduates. if will be similar university one in home ...
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Line 5, column 18, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'in the best'.
Suggestion: in the best
...e of the expences. In my opinion is in best interest for a better evolve to apply f...
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Line 5, column 96, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: First
...o apply for a place far away from home. first of all if you are taking in considerati...
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Line 5, column 265, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... parents support for everything. Obvious , going away the young people are going t...
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Line 5, column 425, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
...ting new people and making new friends. they are going to learn about new culture, n...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, then, well, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1432.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.40615384615 5.12529762239 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47572735473 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.486153846154 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 40.2957997723 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.153846154 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.15384615385 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197955446054 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0723536620411 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0679302150959 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113490096526 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0806634079859 0.056905535591 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.59 12.4159519038 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.11 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.