What are the advantage and disadvantage of leaving your country to live or study aboard?
Nowadays, taking a year out to live or study aboard is becoming increasingly popular. For many people especially young adults, the chance to spend an extended period of time overseas is an attractive one. However, there are both pros and cons to deciding to do this. In this essay, I will discuss some of the reason why moving aboard is so popular and some of the challenges to be overcome.
Let's begin by looking at the advantages of moving away. One of the main positives of heading overseas is that it broadens your horizons. What I mean by this is that you have the chance to meet people from different cultural background and learn to cope with foreign customs and food. This can make you more rounded as a person.
Secondly, moving aboard can lead to a better quality of life. Take British people for example. Thousands of people from the UK move to Spain an Australia every year. These countries have warmer climates and encourage a better work-life. In addition, by living overseas, you can gain qualification and language skills, which may improve promotion prospects on your return.
Turning to the other side of the argument, culture shock is a major problem, Many people who take a year out find hard to cope with the language barrier, the food and general cultural difference. This often leads to homesickness and in some cases a sense of isolation.
Another issue is that it can be difficult to start a new life from scratch. In other words, when you move aboard, you have to make new friends and find your place in the community. This process takes time and can be especially challenging if there is also a language barrier to deal with.
Al things considered, starting life in a foreign country is never easy. You need to weigh up the pros of the better lifestyle, weather and so on , and the cons of culture shock and language barrier. Personally, I believe the benefits in terms of personal growth eventually outweigh any negatives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, for example, i mean, in addition, in other words, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1616.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73900293255 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58490116478 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568914956012 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 512.1 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.8321271047 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.9523809524 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2380952381 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.47619047619 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132872138233 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0366413452619 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0476187351005 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0617193676171 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0375419912578 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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