Many women are choosing to have children later in life. Why is this? Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
In recent times, increasingly female are opting for giving birth later that can be attributed by several reasons. From my observasion, this phenomenal is likely bring more beneficial impacts than harmful ones.
The option of having children later in life is preffered by women in the following days due to numerous factors. One of the most major reasons is that they want to focus on their careers. Many women nowadays prioritize their careers and professional development which need a lot of time and effort. They want to pursuit their goals before commiting the responsibilities of parenthood. In addition, burden of finance is also a reason for delaying childbirth. For instance, in the modern life nowadays, rasing a child requires not only efforts but also a lot of money. Consequently, couples tend to archive a higher level of financial stability which can provide their children a more secure environment with access to better resources and opportunities.
The merits from this phenomenal of delaying childbirth is likely more than its drawbacks. On the one hand, although many research studies have shown that women give birth when they are old is not good for their children, this risk still can be controlled thanks to hopitals. On the other hand, choosing have children later in life can enhance mental health of women, reduce the risk of suffering from depression. In fact, there are several cases that mother is depressed beacause they have babies when they are not ready for this responsibility. Moreover, delaying give birth can also have beneficial effects on children due to the aquadecy in terms of both material and spiritual aspects.
In conclusion, there are a lot of reason why women want to delay childbirth, which I believe that has more advantagous impacts than disadvantagous ones on both children and parents.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 304, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to have'
Suggestion: to have
...o hopitals. On the other hand, choosing have children later in life can enhance ment...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, moreover, so, still, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1543.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14333333333 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83955199909 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553333333333 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.0273172431 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.866666667 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.86666666667 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27951582002 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0858101678379 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0844688759614 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157950545908 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0700167111571 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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