Many working people get little or no excercise either during the working day or in their free time, and have health problems as a result. Why do many working people not to get enough excerise? What can be done about this problem.
Nowadays, individuals are becoming more workaholics and they have no time for exercise; as a result, they feel health issues. I believe that by balancing work and personal life, people can take time for doing physical exercise.
To commence with, there can be many manifold factors for this phenomenon. In recent times, people are more obsessed with their works. So, they do work long hours to get more money. Even though some citizens do office work at weekends in their homes, because of this, they cannot take time for exercise. A survey was conducted by Delhi University, in which they noticed that 9 people out of 10 are busy in their working life and surviving with many health issues like depression. Thus working long hours creates several issues related to health.
However, there can be a plethora of remedies to tackle this issue. Balancing work and life can be one of them. If people do this, they may take time for physical exercise. In America, for instance, many individuals work only eight hours per day and in their spare time, they do yoga, meditation and other physical activities. Consequently, they are more active and physically fit than others. Hence, individuals should give equal preference to work and exercise.
To conclude, because of the overload of work, people have no spare time for other activities, with the help of balance between both work and life they can tackle this problem easily. I think it can be quite beneficial for their health and productive work.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, hence, however, if, may, so, thus, for instance, i think, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1251.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94466403162 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48897018503 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549407114625 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 399.6 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.818517775 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.1875 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8125 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.1875 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.375290353151 0.244688304435 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.139398547935 0.084324248473 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0611334693835 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.262849757651 0.151304729494 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.050170748344 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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