Meat production requires relatively more land than crop production. Some people think that as land is becoming scarce, the world’s meat consumption should be reduced.
What measures could be taken to reduce the world’s meat consumption? What kinds of problem might such measures cause?
The scarcity of land is becoming seriously. As meat production requires vast areas for growing animals, some people think that meat consumption among people around the world should be reduced. In my opinion, there are two possible measures for this issue; however. they also have their drawbacks.
To reduce meat consumption throughout the world, one solution is to provide alternative products with the same sustenance and quality. According to some nutritious doctors, mushrooms which do not require much land to grow, include the same sustenance as red meat. this means people can replace red meat by mushroom in their diet. however, not all mushrooms are edible, even some of them are extremely toxic to people’s health. Many people die every year, because they eat poisonous mushrooms founded in the forest, which is an example of this. Beside mushrooms, there are a variety of supplements that have similar nutrition value to body. they are quite well-known and being used widely nowadays. Nevertheless, people may overuse it, leading to being tired, lack energy.
Another measure is to encourage people to be vegetarian. this means people do not consume meat in every diet. By this way, meat consumption may reduce. Advertisements, newspapers suggesting vegetarian diet may assist in reducing meat consumption. however, it will cost money for encouraging companies to publish this news.
All in all, the land scarcity is a dilemma issue that the world is facing. people struggle with finding effective solutions, although alternative products, changing people’s diet have been given. Informing people about the current situation and raise their awareness about land scarcity to approach the issue are suggested.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, may, nevertheless, so, well, as for, even so, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1475.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48327137546 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7749329539 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609665427509 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.1102623854 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.75 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.45 20.7667163134 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.7 7.06120827912 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.345963897059 0.244688304435 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0978843196911 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.090208646504 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218337848916 0.151304729494 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0831129365529 0.056905535591 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.82 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.91 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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