People are surrounded by many kinds of advertising which can influence their life. Does the positive effect of this trend outweigh the negative effect?
The number of advertisements is becoming increasingly higher. People are occupied with many means of advertising which can have impacts on people’s behaviours and thinking. In my opinion, the advantages of this phenomenon overshadow the disadvantages.
This trend can interrupt people’s life and causes environmental problems. Nowadays, advertisements are not only expressed through newspapers or TV, but also by social network, and the Internet. The reorders allow attaching advertisements to earn more money . Therefore, people are usually interfered by advertisements that appear suddenly during the video, especially with Youtube and Facebook. This makes people annoyed while they are watching something. Moreover, another popular kind of advertisement is leaflet, causing shabby streets. Most people who receive leaflets tend to get rid of them directly where they are. This usually happens at the traffic light where people stop by the red light. These places will become unsanitary during the day.
However, there are two advantages of this increasing. Firstly, customers can gain more information about the product they want to purchase. Advertisements usually give information of products, such as function and ingredients, so people can decide more easily what products and branch they want to buy. Secondly, advertisements can help to push the tax revenue. More people are likely to purchase products, because they are appealed to the catchy slogan and the quality of products. By this way, the profit of a company will be rise significantly. They now have responsibility for paying more tax, due to an increase in sales. This tax can be used for improving infrastructure, rural area, which will be beneficial for people’s life.
In conclusion, although this trend causes inconvenience for people and pollution, it brings benefits to their life by knowing precisely the information of the product and improvement in life. Therefore, the higher number of advertisements surrounding people, the more positive influences they may have.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, in conclusion, kind of, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1759.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.67419354839 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.2166782159 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609677419355 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.8148648672 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.9545454545 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0909090909 20.7667163134 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.40909090909 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286665007927 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0794021246783 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0606788551858 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192672459998 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0387980332338 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 40.34 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.01 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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