The media pay too much attention to the lives and relationships of celebrities such as actors, singers or footballers. They should spend more time reporting the lives of ordinary people instead.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Most media reports tend to focus on the lives and relationships of celebrities. However, I believe that they should take more notice of the lives of normal people than famous people.
On the one hand, there are a variety of reasons why the media place much focus on celebrities. First and foremost, they can make a fortune by disseminating news about famous people as those are likely to attract more audience. Moreover, well-known people often have a huge influence on others. Therefore, they are often inspirators for many people such as Cristiano Ronaldo, who is a perfect example, not only for footballers but also for many other ones, However, being paid much attention means that their slightest bad-mannered behavior can make the headlines on the tomorrow's news. Not only does this upset celebrities' lives, but it can also damage their reputation heavily.
On the other hand, it is argued that the lives of ordinary people are worth being reported as well. Firstly, it shows the diversity of the news, which keeps the readers interested. Furthermore, people also need to be informed about other communities' lives in the world to enrich their knowledge. Another reason to report normal people's lives is that many ordinary ones can be good role models too. They can be good examples of kindness, the desire to succeed, etc.
In summary, the media should strike balanced attention between the well-known people and the normal ones to diversify the range of news and to help the celebrities lead a normal life like many of us.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 571, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'tomorrows'' or 'tomorrow's'?
Suggestion: tomorrows'; tomorrow's
... behavior can make the headlines on the tomorrows news. Not only does this upset celebrit...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... kindness, the desire to succeed, etc. In summary, the media should strike bala...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, in summary, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1276.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96498054475 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60060193094 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556420233463 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.240052335 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.1538461538 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7692307692 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.38461538462 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255698927645 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0942841909106 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0642378933512 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166667439456 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.063795675989 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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