The media pay too much attention to the lives and relationships of celebrities such as actors, singers or footballers. They should spend more time reporting the lives of ordinary people instead. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
it is true that the personal daily lives of renowned people have drawn a lot of attention from the mass media. Meanwhile, the stories of average people do not receive much of their care. personally, I totally agree with this statement.
Firstly, the fact that celebrities become a major part of news has one main reason: breaking news about influential people is more likely to be seductive and profitable to the media corporations. The target audiences tend to be attracted to the scandals of the heavyweights rather than worthy contributions of common citizens; even their notorious habits such as using drugs, being addicted to alcohol or their private emotional affairs are also inclined to be the most expected topics on prime time television or the electronic media. this may affect young people negatively and also bring bad models for them to look up to.
On the other hand, it is obviously essential that the latest information about extraordinary stories of general civilians should be mentioned more on the mass media. being updated to such kind of knowledge may greatly inspire the community to dedicate their lives to society. For example, a prominent student in Nam Dinh has recently invented a car which operates on solar energy. The car can be run in a high capacity without emitting dust and toxic substances into the environment. this brilliant invention has contributed substantially to the process of technology evolution in Vietnam.
In conclusion, I assume that contributions of ordinary people have now been almost overwhelmed by the breaking news stories of famous people in the media. it is significant that regular inhabitants be given broader news coverage in the communications as their fruitful and considerable accomplishments may help motivate other community members to get more involved in strengthening and improving their surrounding living area.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, look, may, so, then, while, for example, in conclusion, kind of, such as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1596.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3023255814 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00127087205 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621262458472 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 79.2082118748 49.4020404114 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.769230769 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1538461538 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3076923077 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167259892204 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0574786155196 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0438291520027 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108900547901 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0436578138834 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.92 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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