Nowadays animal experiments are widely used to develop new medicines and to test the safety of other products. Some people argue that these experiments should be banned because it is morally wrong to cause animals to suffer, while others are in favor of them because of their benefits to humanity. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Humanity demand new treatments and the implications of animal-based testing prevail as a method to minimize human’s risks. As a result, there is an ongoing conflict whether animal experiments should be prohibited owing to unethical matters or should be continuously carried out in that it exerts beneficial impacts on human beings. This essay will elaborate both perspectives prior to my opinion.
On the one hand, the main reason for animal experimentations is that they are complementary to analyse newly devised drugs’ side effects prior to mass implications.
In fact, even though animal testings are considered as ruthless/cruelty and sometimes violate animal right, scientists have to use lab subjects to ensure the safety of human race and prioritize the well-being of man kind over animals. Furthermore, animals experiments are more affordable in comparison with other substitutions such as cyber testings or on human itself, to name but a few.
On the other hand, animal experimentation has sparked (outrageous) opposition what with laboratory animals are subject to tribulations and prostrations caused by scientists and experimenters. Helpless animals such as chimps and rabbits are forced to apply strong chemicals on their sensitive skin or inoculated on a regular basis, not to mention being kept in cramped cages. Such animal rights are seriously infringed by laboratory practices and the numbers of fail attempts are proportional to the death tolls and the probability that altered genomes can undermine the balance of biological diversity. Hence, animal-based testings are sensible cruelty and are advisable to be prohibited in the shortest possible time.
In conclusion, despite having undeniable medical contributions, advantages of animal-based procedures pale into significance with its violation of animal rights and serve repercussions they may cause; therefore any further execution should be banned.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, if, may, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1649.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.72569444444 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.27181182285 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.652777777778 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.1174113837 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.909090909 106.682146367 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1818181818 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7272727273 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26828182993 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0987289913184 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0550290234202 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137037825721 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0603678701291 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.6 13.0946893788 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.17 50.2224549098 56% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.25 12.4159519038 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.57 8.58950901804 123% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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