Millions of dollars are spent on space research every year. Some people argue the money should be spent on improving living standards on earth. Do you agree or disagree?
Of late, in some countries, there is ample amount of money invested on space projects. It is thought that the large amount of money should be spent on improving the quality of human's life. I somehow agree with this statement because space industry already reached particular achievements especially telecommunication and weather controlling.
First of all, in some developing countries, the standard of living has been totally low such as lack of foods, clean water, Low medical and educational quality. Secondly, many people do not have any demand about space industry which does not bring any benefits for normal people. Thus government should spend more money to improving the human's life through developing infrastructures, constructing more school, hospital or facilities to serve the daily life needs of people rather than investing on space.
On the other hand, in the modern society, space researching is quite necessary to help the human's life become easier. Practically, due to the development of space industry, the telecommunication ( like internet, 4G or GBS ) had been going to be common considerably and support sharply on working and studying. For instance, GPS navigation help people discovering the way to go while they are getting lost. Moreover, investing on space is a affective way for scientists can control the weather and help the agricultural industry keeping develop; or recently, ozone layer at the two poles of the earth are tried to patch by space technology.
In conclusion, space industry brings plenty of benefits for human's life and help people live easier; conversely, it is not really necessary in some countries. Therefore, governments should balance the national financial sources to improving the living standard beside investing on space researches.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, first, if, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1516.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43369175627 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00323348479 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609318996416 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.4562966669 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.333333333 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.25 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.0 7.06120827912 184% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256689134536 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.09367700713 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0540708738391 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161727668632 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0462648990172 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.51 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.