In the modern society, some people think that people are becoming more independent, while other people believe that they are more dependent. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Some people claim that modern people are becoming increasingly independent, while others contend that modern citizens enjoy high dependence. This essay will fathom both views, then followed by my own one.
On the one hand, indeed, people nowadays are more independent in some aspects. To begin with, online education allows high school students to enjoy greater independence in study. For example, they can conveniently acquire answers to questions on their own on the Internet instead of asking their parents and teachers for help when they have difficulties in learning. In addition, young adults prefer to live alone because of different interests. For instance, youngsters tend to develop their hobbies different from their parents. In order to enjoy greater freedom of doing their favorites, they may decide to live by themselves.
On the other hand, there is no doubt that more dependence can be found on other occasions. For one thing, college students are more dependent on their parents in finance. Due to the busy work in academic studies, they can hardly spare time to look for part-time jobs where they can receive a certain amount of money and to live independently to so me extent. Instead, they have to accept the financial aids from their parents in order to support themselves. For another, employees have to depend on each other. In most cases, modern tasks in companies are so complicated that not a worker can be capable of them alone, which means that workers are required to rely on each other in order to complete them both quickly and perfectly.
To conclude, from my perspective, we should not be radical about whether modern people are mo re independent or dependent for it depends on different situations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, may, so, then, while, for example, for instance, in addition, no doubt, for one thing, in most cases, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1456.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09090909091 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6689844362 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587412587413 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.9768835452 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0666666667 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0666666667 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.6 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221342999074 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0763415118873 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0953672522424 0.0667982634062 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155338824112 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100404199426 0.056905535591 176% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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