Modern technology has made it easier for individuals to download copyrighted music and books from the internet for no charge To what extent is this a positive or negative development

Essay topics:

Modern technology has made it easier for individuals to download copyrighted music and books from the internet for no charge.
To what extent is this a positive or negative development?

Nowadays, It is easy to realize that cutting-edge technology has created a lot of benefits for everyone. One of them helps users to download copyrighted music and books through the internet without fees. It is hard to deny that is really great for audiences, but this also brings difficulties for authors.

On the one hand, with the updated technology in the digital era users have a high ability to easily access enormous sources of books and music on the world to improve knowledge. Because connecting everything on the internet helps people to read or listen to anything in their concerns. They can totally enjoy this freely by searching contents in some special platforms which provide copyrighted works without fees. If people can utilize the advance of technology, they will expand their knowledge. Moreover, the advantage also saves the budget for everyone because they do not need to purchase when they want to enjoy any work. Obviously, it is a great motivation for everyone finding out or building many free websites and platforms for communities.

On the other hand, the benefits will make many authors and creative contents lose motivation to create continuously. If nobody already purchases any works that they enjoy, many producers can not get any profits to pay for authors. Therefore, their income is affected seriously and it might be hard to maintain their living without purchasing living costs, basic demands such as eating, commuting. These authors have to find other jobs to live and it is really hard to concentrate on what they create in art or literature fields. In the short term, people might not easily realize the problem, but in the long term the number of products can decrease sharply. After that, users have to suffer the consequences because they do not respect what they watch by paying little fee.
In conclusion, a new change usually has pros and cons for everyone. In the first sign, it is easy to see the benefits for users in the world. However, this also cause bad impacts for group of authors, creators, so in sustainable way the behavior should be removed.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, really, so, therefore, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1756.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 353.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97450424929 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5997116359 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543909348442 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 541.8 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.9634526309 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 97.5555555556 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6111111111 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.83333333333 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192152005266 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0629199889671 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0527714073771 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144034914319 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0838490403639 0.056905535591 147% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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