Modern technology has made it easier for individuals to download copyrighted music and books from the internet for no charge.
To what extent is this a positive or a negative development?
New technology has made it easier for people to download copyrighted music and books from the internet without paying money. In my opinion, this view has benefits and drawbacks appropriate with each person and each situation. The following essay will analyse this statement in detail.
On the on hand, getting music and books from the internet for no charge will help more individuals can approach with music and the knowledge from books especially with poor people. it help teenagers and staff relaxing after the hard working day at school or business. They will have more motivation, inspiration and energy for making a wonderful things for their life and for their nation. Furthermore, this trend will create a good habit for individuals and a amazing group for the social. Listenning music will help the citizens more relaxing, comfortable and take a distance away from stress, and also reading books can help human train their knowledge for improving themselves. In addition, with some artist this trend can be their motivation when they can see the helpful of their art with the social and people's life. this is their motivation and responsibility for improving themselves and have more contribution to their country. For example, with the development of technology a plenty of website to download copyrighted music and books from the internet for no charge like zing, sportify and youtube. More artist and their art will be famous with individuals thought this website.
On the other hand, there are enomous numbers of music in the internet, following that the quality of product will be worse. A lot of music appear with terrible content and do not appropriate the the youngs generation. it will lead a horrible influence to their habit and mentality. For example, when some young artist listen to that song, it will affect to their art path in the future. Moreover, some book have fake information in the internet which have not been confirmed by any professtional, it will have a terrible influence for the knowledge of the individuals.
To conclude, download copyrighted music and books from the internet without paying money have its own advantages and drawbacks appropriate with each person. The individuals need to know which music and book is good for them to improve themselves better than before.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, for example, in addition, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 10.4138276553 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1937.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 380.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09736842105 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69427807567 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.468421052632 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 585.0 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.8384679512 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.947368421 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.26315789474 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.368935699561 0.244688304435 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130298293777 0.084324248473 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.130013198038 0.0667982634062 195% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.241834067565 0.151304729494 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0823127905653 0.056905535591 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.