In the modern world, people are no longer necessary to use food from animals or product from animals such as medicine and clothing. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In the globalisation process, people are attempting to restrict their needs in using animals to manufacture products such as food, medicine and clothing. In my opinion, i totally agree with this given statement that human will be far better off stopping exploiting animals.
First but foremost, other forms of life besides human have their own right to live. Therefore, utilizing anima;s for hundreds thousand of years and then constitutes an unmoral action. According to a statistical report, annually human sacrifices thousands survivals of crocodiles just to satisfy their never-ending thirst of fashion, which poses a profound threat to the ecosystem.The short-term result is that it has directly negative influence on the alarmingly decreased number of animals especially endangered species. In the long-term, this discriminated usage of human will leads to the state of ecological disequilibrium.
Second but not less crucial, instead of using meat in our daily diet , vegetable and synthetic products are the most potential substitutes. This trend of consuming organic food can have a positive impact on the global health. With advances in scientific research haunted for hundreds years, human are now easier to approach diverse method to generate artificial food that taste like meat and also supply enough essential nutrients with no harmfully fatty substances.
Last but not least, It is no denying that animals have invariably been used for medical research such as experimenting new drugs.However human can abandon those experiments owing to modern computer-simulated techniques which even have better and more accurate results.
To sum up, it can be reiterated that it is definitively possible to lead a good life without depending on animal products and people have no right to exploit them.
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also, besides, but, first, however, if, second, so, then, therefore, such as, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1533.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51438848921 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04286932221 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.665467625899 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 79.8498591107 49.4020404114 162% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.363636364 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2727272727 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.27272727273 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179037090242 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0652273964587 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.084813195474 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107939956949 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0643358590138 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.22 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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