Money is important in most people's lives. Although some people think it is more important than the others.
What do you feel are the right uses of money?
What other factors are important for a good life?
Money plays an important role in our life. By contrast, many people believe that money is the most value than everything in their life. In my point of view, money is essential, but money is only a small part of many things responsible for controlling our lives.
In my opinion, the best way to use money is to invest in myself. When people have knowledge and position, they will know how to make money from everything. For example, learning more foreign languages and soft skills will help them reach more people and cultures around the world, especially will have more job opportunities in the future. Therefore, raising knowledge is extremely important. Knowing how to use money will help them have more opportunities and relationships in life. For example, when having problems in their life, money, and relationships will make their work more smooth and convenient. Having money helps people take care of their family's health better. For example, they can take their family out to tighten family bonds. Using the money to help their child enjoy a progressive and comprehensive education.
On the other hands, money is very important in people's lives, but money is not everything. Money cannot buy happiness. For example, when people are busy earning money to have a better life and forgetting to spend time with their families and children, the child will lose their affection for them. In addition, health is one of the most important factors, when people grow old, they will clearly feel how much health is more important than money when facing life and death. For example, They have cancer of the marrow but can not cure the disease, although they have a lot of money. And when people die, they can not bring money with them. Therefore, health is very important and must be practiced daily.
In conclusion, money is a very important thing in people’s lives, but money is not everything. We need to know how to equal best among money, happiness, health and many others.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, therefore, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1652.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93134328358 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54941801002 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.474626865672 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 503.1 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.3415547215 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.6666666667 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9523809524 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.61904761905 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.362929293789 0.244688304435 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135811618835 0.084324248473 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0910409508112 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.265816712496 0.151304729494 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0621424317801 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.21 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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