The money spent by governments on space programmes would be better spent on vital public services such as schools and hospitals.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is sometimes argued that governments have distributed a huge amount of finance on space explosion programmes. From my point of view, I entirely advocate expending this money on crucial public services.
There are several reasons why the space programmes should be dropped. The initial reason is that these projects could come at an enormous cost to governments because they have to possess high-expense equipment and spend funds on training scientists and staff involved. Secondly, normal individuals could not acquire any value or benefits from space research and these programmes instead of politicians who are inclined to strengthen their power by rewarding achievements of space. Finally, carrying out space programmes is capable of bringing a wide range of risks, which likely even make them cost their lives pointlessly. The Challenger space shuttle proved that space travel and research is dangerous and it is not worthy to be spent a huge amount of money on.
I do believe that the money should be allocated to public services owing to their advantages. Firstly, it is obvious that the cost for equipment and training doctors, teachers or other public servants is much cheaper compared with that of space projects. Furthermore, these significant services are of use for almost residents in society. For example, infrastructures including hospitals, road, building or schools have positive effect on human’s daily lives and everyone is always in need of security of police. Thus, if governments reallocate the funds to vital public services, it is indisputable that the poor manage to be lifted out of poverty and the life standard is facilitated considerably.
In conclusion, I am supportive of spending money on basis public services to make an improvement for society instead of vanity space projects.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, then, thus, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1535.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34843205575 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93513422685 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592334494774 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.5587173283 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.076923077 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0769230769 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.23076923077 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251829663215 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0861570708164 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0540602313496 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137028887383 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0325946648548 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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