The money spent by governments on space programmes would be better spent on vital public services such as schools and hospitals. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Many argue that space exploration funded by the government should be allocated more to public facilities such as schools and hospitals. I disagree since the space program would benefit people in technologies and finding new discoveries.
The advancement of technology is the significant impact of the government investing heavily in space exploration, creating a more convenient living. To put it more simply, many aspects of human living depend on space to operate, such as communication. Having to evaluate regularly the communication technology in space would improve the quality of human communication on earth. In 2018 Indonesian government partnered with SpaceX to undergo research regarding the 5G technology in mobile phones. Two years after the research collaboration ended, the technology emerged and was widespread among big telecommunication companies in many nations. This can be succeeded without the investment allocated by the Indonesian government to space programs.
Also, investing heavily in space activities leads to more scientific discoveries as many parts of space are still left unexplored. The new findings would help scientists answer the leftover questions regarding the universe, hopefully tackling problems found on earth. For instance, only after the expedition of Apollo launched and landed safely on the moon did people learn that sea levels are, to some extent, influenced by the moon’s gravity. These discoveries have helped fishermen leverage their schedule in finding fish and determine which time is the safest for them to sail. Hence, allocating the government’s budget to space programs is not a waste of money.
In conclusion, the emergence of top-notch technologies and new findings are the positive impacts of spending the government’s money on space exploration. If possible, the government needs to increase its budget to compete with other nations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, regarding, so, still, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1626.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.68531468531 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14463791493 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594405594406 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 507.6 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.4999782135 49.4020404114 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 108.4 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0666666667 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181630562501 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0657365536411 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.051038497444 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12578641068 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0549107949426 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.72 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.77 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.