The money spent by governments on space programmes would be better spent on vital public services such as schools and hospitals. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Submitted by janemai on Tue, 09/17/2019 - 09:14

Nowadays, space programmes have become an important part of government funding. While some people think there is no necessary to spend money on exploring space, i believe that funding space programmes can bring a positive effect, but the amount of funding should be limited.

On the one hand, it promote better understanding of space which can promote achievement on science. For instance, there are many questions in physic can not be solved on Earth, but it can have a huge break through on exploring space. Also, space exploration can advance the technology including building space station and exam the theory of physic, which will have a great improvement on comprehensive national power.

On the other hand, there should be a maximum limitation on the spending of space projects. Due to the fact that total budget of government is limited, if we over-spending on space projects, there will be less funding for other essential facilities and service for people. So i believe, government should set a maximum amount of funding space programmes and allocate more money on things matter to people’s daily life.

To sum up, there are certain reason to fund space projects since it is the direct way to improve national power and also provide a solution for human’s living. But i think we should be aware of spending too much money on it, so it should be a limitation on funding for it.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, while, for instance, i think, to sum up, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1175.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 235.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7820936845 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553191489362 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 370.8 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.6867736154 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.5 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.7 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162327565684 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0760041710024 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0288974087805 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10861358557 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0377818698917 0.056905535591 66% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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