Schools should concentrate on teaching students the academic subjects that will be useful for their future careers. Subjects such as music and sports are not useful. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It has been an controversy about whether the core subjects should be consider as the more useful subjects compare with others such as music and sports. From my point of view, although the core subjects will be beneficial to students’ career prospect, other subjects are also important.
There is no doubt that the core subjects has profound influence on students in many ways. On one hand, it provide the basic knowledge to our world which is the reason why most core subjects are compulsory. For example, history class teach the origination of countries and math class help them to build the logical thinking. On the other hand, these subjects promote the career development when students enter the adulthood. Since the competetion in the workplace is getting intensive, i believe it is important for children concentrate on the subjects which can lead to a better career life. To help a youngster reach the norm of our society and being more competetive in the job market, these courses should be emphasis by schools and teachers.
Except the core subjects, there are some courses that maintain the phycological and physical health level of students. Sports class, for instance, can help students relax themselves from the pressure of examination and build up their body. These courses which might be considered as the non-useful for their career life, but it is an essential part of their health.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, for example, for instance, no doubt, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1183.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 232.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09913793103 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68012998935 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590517241379 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 350.1 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 22.5161099351 49.4020404114 46% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 107.545454545 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0909090909 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.45454545455 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295125960134 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105932734498 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0601147637641 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198810331565 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0548161868767 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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