More and more companies allow their employees to work from home or “remotely” rather than going into an office each day.
Do the advantages of this policy outweigh the disadvantages?
The idea that, more companies should allow their employees to work from home or “remotely” rather than going into an office each day has been an ongoing debate since the last decade and the the current Covid-19 pandemic has only made the case stronger for the proposition. So, I believe that work-from-home is the new norm that must be adopted.
I would like to present a couple of valid reasons to support my stance. Firstly, allowing employees to operate remotely is beneficial for any company. This method ensures dramatically increases savings and as a result there are massive reduction in office expanses electricity bill, telephone lines, Wi-Fi, AC services amongst many others. Also the money saved can be utilized to provide salary hikes, incentives, bonuses to the workers, who would not feel burdened. For example the boss gives a bonus to all the department boys before the festive season. This move can consequently raise the productivity of the employees and there would be less cases of downsizing in the unit.
Secondly, to stay at home and work is beneficial for employees who can plan their work schedules as per their lifestyle. For example , in a startup some guys of marketing team are night owls who send their presentations in the wee hours of the day which will be reviewed in the morning by their leader who is an early-riser. Thus, a certain degree of flexibility is allowed. They can schedule a discussion in evening. Also the employed people who would not have to face the difficulty to balance life between work , and can adequately take out quality time to spend with their families.
It is also imperative to mention that offices indirectly support the lives of many unorganized labourers. For, example in front of an office or a factory lies the food station, a tea stall and a cigarette joint. All these people's lives are directly related to the office's functioning. In case of an office shutdown these men don't get their means to run their lives.
So, in conclusion I want to rest my case saying that in these unprecedented times of the coronavirus pandemic where meeting people, working together is an ordeal and where economies are hit terribly hard it has become inevitable to work away from offices in the comfort of houses even if that means killing off the livelihood of a few men.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1941.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 397.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88916876574 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46372701284 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71771664387 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 236.0 176.041082164 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594458438287 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 626.4 506.74238477 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 78.2027280002 49.4020404114 158% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.833333333 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0555555556 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.94444444444 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.01903807615 398% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.303192428946 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0759380903786 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100107439684 0.0667982634062 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16574590665 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.1357732794 0.056905535591 239% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.