More and more companies allow their employees to work from home or “remotely” rather than going into an office each day.
Do the advantages of this policy outweigh the disadvantages?
Nowadays, many employees are allowed not to work in their companies. Some people think that it has a number of disadvantages. However, I believe that there are more benefits than disadvantages.
It is true that it would appear some disadvantages. First of all, while there might be some urgent things in work, when the employees did not gather in the companies together, they could not contact and get information from their colleagues soon. As a result, it would affect their work efficiency. Another disadvantage is that when employees did not work with others face to face, they could not have active work atmosphere. Then, their attitude towards work would be affected too.
While there are several disadvantages, I believe the number of advantages much more outweighs the disadvantages. First of all, working at home is convenient for employees. They do not have to waste time on transportation anymore . In fact, employees in cities always have to spend more than an hour on the way to their companies, especially in the metropolitan cities which usually have traffic jams. Another benefit of working at home is that it can save electric energy and fuel because companies do not need to keep lights on all the time and the employees would not use vehicles on the ways to the companies. These results are also good for our environment.
In conclusion , I argue that working at home has more advantages than disadvantages. I think it would benefit the society along with the employees if we all keep doing it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, so, then, while, i think, in conclusion, in fact, as a result, first of all, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1231.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82745098039 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74554618191 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.486274509804 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 391.5 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 255.0 20.2975951904 1256% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1231.0 106.682146367 1154% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 255.0 20.7667163134 1228% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 113.0 7.06120827912 1600% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.350894152943 0.244688304435 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.350894152943 0.084324248473 416% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.243637175618 0.151304729494 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0530547825439 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 128.8 13.0946893788 984% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -178.89 50.2224549098 -356% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 101.6 11.3001002004 899% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.21 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 18.76 8.58950901804 218% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 40.0 78.4519038076 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 57.0 9.78957915832 582% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 104.0 10.1190380762 1028% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 57.0 10.7795591182 529% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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