More and more people are migrating to cities in search of a better life, but city life can be extremely difficult. Explain some of the difficulties of living in the city. How can governments make urban life better for everyone?
It would be argued by someone that increasingly citizens tend to move to urban to look for a comfortable living environment, despite that it would run into many difficulties. This essay will discuss some primary reasons why this is happening and suggest some solutions for this issue.
There are many reasons why gradually more people seem to be changing to development areas to find a standard living, even so they may face to many challenging in big cities and I believe that economy is the first culprit. Almost people might waste a variety of money to cover living expenses. For example, the meal cost in urban is more expensive than in suburbs. Another reason is the area's atmosphere. The environment in cities seems to be more populated rather than in the countryside. For example, according to research in the year 2000, the rate case of lung cancer in urban was higher than in the outskirts.
There are many various measures that could be implemented to tackle this problem. Firstly, it would be better to move the industrial zone to the outskirts instead of focusing in cities. Secondly, supporting social housing and decreasing individual tax for the low-class would be taken.
In conclusion, there are numerous reasons leading to have migration to cities to find a higher quality life, in spite of significantly hard and many steps need to be taken to address this issue.
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- More and more people are migrating to cities in search of a better life but city life can be extremely difficult Explain some of the difficulties of living in the city How can governments make urban life better for everyone 56
- More and more people are migrating to cities in search of a better life but city life can be extremely difficult Explain some of the difficulties of living in the city How can governments make urban life better for everyone 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
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... than in suburbs. Another reason is the areas atmosphere. The environment in cities s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, as to, even so, for example, in conclusion, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1162.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 234.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96581196581 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71710194841 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576923076923 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 364.5 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.7620444385 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.8333333333 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232834154959 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.075224187328 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0501864508616 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12357291533 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0451762761165 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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