More and more people are migrating to cities in search of a better life, but city life can be extremely difficult. Explain some of the difficulties of living in a city. How can governments make urban life better for everyone?
urban area has been considered as an ideal destination for many people. Despite the oppotunities and convenience, there are some challenges that individuals must face. Therefore, government need to take plausible solutions to better city life.
To commence with, one of the primary problems in city is overpopulation which results i. highly competitive environment. The development of city has attracted the majority of citizens to settle in, thus, led to the increasingly competitive job market. In other words, there would be high rate of unemployment in city. In addtion, it is true that city has costly living standard. To illustrate, the price for neccesities namely food and clothes in the city is often much more expensive than ones in the countryside. Meanwhile, the avarage income of people are believed to be low in relation to city’s cost of living.
it is neccesary that local aithorities apply effective methods to curb issues mentioned above. one of which is that they should launch some non-profit social housing that assist people with financial difficulties. it is not only help them with basic needs for living but also act as a motivation for them to overcome challenges. Another way is that there should be some changes in citizens' salary so that it could be suitable with the living standard
In conclusion, although city is a place of good opportunities, there are a plethora of difficulties that one have to deal with in order to be succesful. also, it is the government’s responsibility to solve social issues, especially in city to enhance the quality of urban life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, thus, while, in conclusion, in other words, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1341.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11832061069 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04628217524 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603053435115 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 53.4109435312 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.4 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4666666667 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.321674615558 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0922848853157 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0787984083695 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18302153977 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0564935596091 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.12 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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