Today more and more people are using mobile phones and computers. Thus, people are losing the ability to communicate face to face. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays an increasing number of people are utilising smartphones and computers due to which individuals are becoming less adept in communication in person. In my opinion, i completely agree that over dependence on the internet and technology causes people to give less preference to face to face interactions as it provides more opportunities to show their views.
A good reason why the internet leads people to deprive from real interactions with others is that it gives more freedom to people to express their thoughts and ideas while staying anonymous. At present, youngsters, especially introverts face difficulties to socialize, either because of their shy nature or lack of confidence. This could possibly lead to self isolation in their adulthood, but through social media like instagram, Facebook they can make friends around the world and share their feelings with them without even meeting them in real life. Hence, it encourages them to use the internet over face to face communication.
Another reason is that surfing on the internet means interacting with people around the world by sitting in the comfort zone. For example, from the last decade, people living across the globe are more well connected with each other than ever, due to the introduction of social networking services. Therefore, people are losing their ability to communicate face to face as they are more interested in communicating with their virtual friends. Moreover, through social networking sites individuals can have conversations with theirs alot friends whether they are living close to them or in other countries, at once as opposed to wasting time by visiting them.
In conclusion, i reiterate that people would forget how to communicate in future if they heavily rely on the internet and technology .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1525.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35087719298 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89038202996 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585964912281 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 42.8749864468 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.636363636 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9090909091 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.63636363636 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264452005588 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115580783998 0.084324248473 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.096220214468 0.0667982634062 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167192298503 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0574416899002 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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