More and more people are relying on the private car as their major means of transportation. Describe some of the problems overreliance on cars can cause, and suggest at least ine possible solution.
Citizens are allowed to use either private cars or public transportation. Although, some argue that people choose private cars because it has become a significant role in their life style. In this essay, I will show problems relating to overreliance on automobiles and give some solution.
One big problem facing cities is pollution from vehicles. Most urban areas are full of cars, particularly during the rush hour. For instance, in Tashkent, there is often gridlock at peak times. As a result, air quality is deteriorating, and rates of asthma are rising. The answer to increase tax on petrol. This would encourage people to leave their cars at home.
Another problem is that the troubles of getting to the destination. It is common these days for people who drives a private car for commuting rather than using public transportation. For instance, in modern city such as Fergana, public transportation system is undeveloped, therefore people use their private cars is used for passengers commuting. To address this issue, the government could increase a number and type of public transports such as buses, hi-speed railways. This would hopefully people tend to use more public transport rather than private cars.
To summarize, using public transports has become a much less popular in many countries, due to the reasons such as increasing of private cars. This is a serious problem, and rising tax on petrol and enlarge public transportation system could be optimal solution for this issue. My view is that the main responsibility for solving the problem is lies between people and the government.
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...ic transport rather than private cars. To summarize, using public transports ha...
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...lies between people and the government.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, therefore, for instance, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1350.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19230769231 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88220412041 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584615384615 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.1861381487 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.4117647059 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2941176471 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.11764705882 7.06120827912 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225108098521 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0747927898148 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0671385711433 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150661135586 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0828818578141 0.056905535591 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.23 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.