More and more people are suffering from health problems caused by a modern lifestyle which cannot be treated with modern medicines. Some people think that a return to traditional medicine should be encouraged. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Even though modern medicine has increased life expectancy, the overall quality of life has taken a plunge due to health problems caused by the sedentary lifestyle. While some recommend a return to traditional medicine, I am convinced of a combination of classical and state-of-the-art medicines to adequately address the situation.
On the one hand, various types of old ways of treatment are highly suggested to solve some problems. For example, in order to deal with insomnia, an older treating treatment called acupuncture can be more effective than chemical drugs. In addition, most types of conventional methods are based on herbs and plants which are normally consistent with human nature and may have positive action. For instance, people use garlic for preventing the flu, and it also strengthen the immune system.
On the other hand, although traditional medicines are effective in treating some health conditions, they are not designed to manage the issue caused by the lack of physical activity in today's society. Compared to the old generation, young adults nowadays facing obesity, diabetes, and depression caused by a sedentary lifestyle, and these types of problems can only be treated with modern technology. Moreover, modern medicine is defined by tremendous advances in the understanding of human health and the ability to moderate the course of chronic diseases, correct disabling physical conditions, and cure molecular deficiencies. However, there are a lot of known and unknown side effects because they have not been in the market for long. The cost and availability of folk medicine are is also outweigh the contemporary one. For example, current medicines take lots of time and research to come up with few treatments while traditional remedies are available everywhere.
In conclusion, modern lifestyle has created medical problems that were absent in the past when humans consumed more natural products and exercised more. Therefore, I recommend a combination of both traditional and modern medicine to create a harmonious balance and bring the best result in curing people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 68, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'suggested solving'.
Suggestion: suggested solving
...pes of old ways of treatment are highly suggested to solve some problems. For example, in order to...
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Line 3, column 461, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'strengthens'?
Suggestion: strengthens
...lic for preventing the flu, and it also strengthen the immune system. On the other han...
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Line 5, column 650, Rule ID: A_LOT_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun known seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lot of knowns'.
Suggestion: a lot of knowns
...ecular deficiencies. However, there are a lot of known and unknown side effects because they h...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, moreover, so, then, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1785.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44207317073 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94703234258 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59756097561 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 584.1 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.4906766794 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.5 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4285714286 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.57142857143 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.318569693661 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.091302478902 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0501267842815 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175863484003 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0364843671375 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.57 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.93 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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