modern lifestyles have changed considerably over the past five decades. however, some aspects of life have remained constant. Compare and contrast life in Vietnam now and fifty years ago
There are a variety of different perspectives on the question of how Vietnamese lifestyles now and in the last fifty-year changed. Although many people feel that life has changed completely, others can easily find out things still unchanged over the years. This essay will examine both sides of this argument and provide an overall opinion.
Fundamentally, there is a wide range of differences between life in the two periods of time in Vietnam. Perhaps the main contrast between them is that family structures have changed from extended families into nuclear families. Unlike in the past, young people today tend to have their own life by living apart from their parents or relatives. For instance, most students move to metropolis cities to get a better education and seek a better opportunity for a career. Another aspect which illustrates the differences between life in the two periods of time in Vietnam is the role of family’s members. To be more specific,in the past, the breadwinner in the traditional family mainly is the father and the mother who stay at home and handle household chores and take care of their children whereas women nowadays can perform better on making a living in comparison with those in the past.
While Vietnamese life in 1971 and now may have changed a lot, there are still numerous things that have been maintained amongs Vietnamese people. First of all, the unity and patriotic tradition of the residents has never changed throughout time. A good illustration of this is that although people do not have to face wars and fight for their national sovereignty nowadays, they always look to their homeland no matter where they live and work. For example, whenever there is a natural disaster in my country, Vietnamese people always try to share the difficulties with their countrymen. Secondly, the huge love for traditional costumes such as Ao dai. In fact, in modern life, although there are a massive number of popular outfit styles from other cultures such as the US, China or Korea that are dressed by Vietnamese people, people still chose Ao dai in their important days or events.
In conclusion, it must be said that this topic has generated some discussion recently. Weighing up all of the facts, it would seem that the most substantial similarities between life in Vietnam now and fifty years ago is inhabitants’ spiritual life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, still, whereas, while, apart from, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, in fact, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1993.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 396.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03282828283 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46091344257 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69912877486 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 176.041082164 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585858585859 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 622.8 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.7421132396 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.235294118 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2941176471 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.64705882353 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259794615261 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0758984129174 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0676417760376 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154304839482 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0336205491084 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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