More and more students are choosing to study at colleges and universities in a foreign country. Do the benefits of studying abroad outweigh the drawbacks?
In recent years, a lot of students has aimed to study at colleges and universities in overseas. I agree that it give them a golden chance for lighting up their future and I believe that there are more advantages than drawbacks.
There are a variety of benefits of studying abroad. First, since developed countries have good education systems. As a result, student who study abroad have better qualifications. For instance, on top universities in the world employing lecture who are expects in their fields, which allows them to have more job opportunities. Second, because students must live without their family, they can lead an independent life. For example, by deciding everything by themselves such as cooking, studying, manage personal finance. The foreign students will become more mature in the future. Final, they can immerse themselves in a language.
On the other hand, living away from home can be challenging for many overseas students. Students have to homesick and miss their friend. They have to earn money and pay bills to their university and life. Therefore, this problem can have to a bad effect to the academic result. Moreover, the language barrier is really cause difficulties. Not to mention, some student experience culture shock. For instance, due to living and working with many students in the world, they can open to different cultures, traditions.
In conclusion, there are various advantages of study abroad overweight than drawbacks. Although students have to live and work in a new culture and in a foreign country. So I believe that it is not a big barrier for them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, really, second, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1353.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14448669202 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80444994536 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593155893536 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.9515652513 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 67.65 106.682146367 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.15 20.7667163134 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.65 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250813747237 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0800446476225 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0947229136364 0.0667982634062 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168393316362 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.072870773503 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.0946893788 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.64 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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