More and more wild animals are on the verge of extinction and others are on the endangered list. What are the reasons for this? What can be done to solve this problem?
The number of wild animal species that are on the verge of extinction or on the endangered list Are expanding at an alarming rate, what is the reason for this? And what should we do to fix This problem?
A lot of wild animals nowadays are on endangered lists or will be very soon some animal species Have already been extinct for a while and it’s frustrating because our generation got plundered Of the right to witness such magnificent creatures walking on this plant, this was caused by a lot Of things firstly the environment and the drastic climate change and the other prim reason for it Is the destruction of their natural habitats and indiscriminate hunting that is all caused by human tyranny that led to a lot of wild animal species going extinct, for example the Indian single horned rhinoceros it’s a majestic species of creatures that have been a great reference for a huge number of artists like painters and even some of the greatest wood sculpture but even still people continued to believe the outrageous tales that implied that a single horned rhinoceros horn is a cure all elixir so hunters continued to hunt them until 1996 they became an endangered species, the second example are the northern penguins that got wiped out by climate change that melted its territory due to the expanding of the ozone that humans caused,
A solution to solve this problem has to be put into place by the Governments worldwide and they should continue developing the laws to protect these innocent animals and put more efforts in constructing nature reserves and imprisoning the poachers and giving them heavy sentences to make them refrain from hunting animals again and to punish rich people who collect animal parts,
A lot of animal are going to get extinct because of humans so we should try to protect them,
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, so, still, while, as to, even so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1509.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79047619048 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52518481047 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542857142857 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 16.0721442886 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 105.0 20.2975951904 517% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 715.067828951 49.4020404114 1447% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 503.0 106.682146367 471% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 105.0 20.7667163134 506% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 26.0 7.06120827912 368% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.347452475364 0.244688304435 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.291970874248 0.084324248473 346% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.084262792562 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215205502266 0.151304729494 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.150283702587 0.056905535591 264% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 53.6 13.0946893788 409% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -26.64 50.2224549098 -53% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 43.1 11.3001002004 381% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.69 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 12.25 8.58950901804 143% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 9.78957915832 189% => OK
gunning_fog: 44.0 10.1190380762 435% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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